This seems so unoriginal to me... but whatever :D I promised a poem to a couple people so here tis.
She's dancing with the air
Finding joy in simply living
Swishing her long dark hair
At this moment there is no misgiving
Grasping the imaginary hand
Brought close to her see-through prince
Being taken somewhere pleasantly grand
Where only smiles will her face evince
Through the ephemeral maze
Into a scene unreal
Under a dreamy bridge they blaze
She hears the distant bells peal
At once she is brought to a place
Where no one is ever still
Startling duos wild with grace
Her soul is violently dancing
with visions surreal
Very good, seems pretty original to me, definitely you.
ReplyDeleteThis is the most disgusting piece I have ever read! Purely nauseating! Oh my goodness, I'm sick now! You made me sick! I expect better! Gross! ...Now I have to go throw up.
ReplyDeleteLol Jerome'.
ReplyDeleteWell if that's not origional I don't know what is. Perhaps you're thinking the general concept is not origional? =P Even if it isn't, it's made new and lovely in your own origional words =) I like it! ***** Five stars ;)